How to write a screenplay

Here's an exchange from my screen adaptation of The Dizzies. Can you say, à la Rilo Kiley, "It's a Hit"?

[They enter the generator room.]
TRUNG: You know what I always say. "Ut vertigine correptis videntur omnia moveri, omnia iis falsa sunt, quum error in ipsorum cerebro sit..."
MAX: Yes, but—